Turning of time
Sun begins new journey
Return of light
Balsamic moon rises
In starless sky
Sun begins new journey
Return of light
Balsamic moon rises
In starless sky
Discipline of haiku 5-7-5 and tanka 5-7-5-7-5 rhythmic expression of human breath-attentive to space/time using matter-of-fact language and original imagery symbolizes everyday life that explodes with revelation! Creating visual poems using just a few words is the most potent point of discipline in this family tree of poetry. I applaud its lending to be direct and to the point. A tall order that I can comfortable live with. Haiku, tanka: Poems with discipline: No wishy-washy
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