breaking through walls
pierce mist of mine
idea unfolds
it is not of mine and theirs
it is mine and ours
pierce mist of mine
idea unfolds
it is not of mine and theirs
it is mine and ours
Discipline of haiku 5-7-5 and tanka 5-7-5-7-5 rhythmic expression of human breath-attentive to space/time using matter-of-fact language and original imagery symbolizes everyday life that explodes with revelation! Creating visual poems using just a few words is the most potent point of discipline in this family tree of poetry. I applaud its lending to be direct and to the point. A tall order that I can comfortable live with. Haiku, tanka: Poems with discipline: No wishy-washy
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